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Monday, September 6, 2010

Zeba's Green Haiku


Check out Zeba green vegetable haiku poem.


6 comments:

  1. Dear Zeba,
    I think you must've worked really hard at your school because you did really well when you thought of ideas for your haiku. I liked it how you had 5 syllables, then 7 syllables and then 5 syllables.
    From Queenie and Oli.

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  2. Hi Queenie and Oli,

    Thanking for leaving me a comment. I found writing the Haiku poem, but I am pleased with what I've written.

    From Zeba

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  3. Hi Zeba,
    I like your
    flower story
    it was very good,
    keep up the good work!
    from Atlanta.

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  4. hi zeba


    I like your green haiku poem keep up the good work



    from loisi

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  5. Kia ora koutou
    My name is Naketa Ikihele. I have just stumbled across your blog after looking at the Manaiakalani website. I just wanted to leave a comment to say that I am thoroughly enjoying reading your Haiku poems. I teach early childhood teachers how to use digital technologies , so will be sending them the link to your great blog.
    Thank you so much for sharing.

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  6. Hi Naketa,

    Thank you for leaving a comment on our blog. We think your blog is awesome and very soon we will be making a comment on it.

    From Room 3 Panmure Bridge School

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