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Sunday, September 12, 2010

Atlanta's long green grass Haiku poem


Check out Atlanta's green grass poem.


6 comments:

  1. Hi Atlanta.

    We liked how you spoke clerly


    From Harry and vincent

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  2. Hi Atlanta,
    I liked your haiku poem John and Maki thought that you had a clear voice in your move.I liked how you used expression.




    From
    Maki and John

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  3. Dear Atlanta,
    We love your haiku. We like how you did it on green grass. We also like how you had a clear voice.
    From Isobel and Madeleine.

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  4. Hi Atlanta

    we liked your yellow poem
    from Zeba and Latham.

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  5. HI Atlanta
    i like uyr poem





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    maki

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