Patrick what I really loved about your retelling of this story was the expression that you used in your voice, it was like you really wanted to be there as part of the story, because you made it sound so exciting! I also liked the voices that you created for the characters! They were great! Room 8, Melville Intermediate, Hamilton, Waikato.
Patrick what I really loved about your retelling of this story was the expression that you used in your voice, it was like you really wanted to be there as part of the story, because you made it sound so exciting! I also liked the voices that you created for the characters! They were great!
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Hi Patrick,
ReplyDeleteYou read your story well. You read slowly and I understood you.
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